using linkers adverbs and appropriate idioms to make the sentence more fluent natural and colloquialI used to want to be a doctor However I eventually gave up because it takes at least 10 years of stu

I used to want to be a doctor; however, I eventually gave up on that dream because, you know, it takes at least 10 years of study to become a doctor, and honestly, I find that job could be really stressful. So, here I am, shifting gears and now I'm all about being a freelancer.